(Poetry) the great ones by Susan Hawthorne

Susan Hawthorne, Ph.D.

in order to know the great ones

there are some necessary deeds

examine the source how water rises

 

watch the light of sun and moon

observe them spin and unspin

follow rivers from their source

ride currents to the ocean floor

 

in the sky the speckled horse

shines as she gallops between stars

consider what exists and how

will you know it in your mind and heart?

 

lick the fierce honey from the flower

dance with the bee’s peregrinations

the six-footed ones wingless

fill yourself on plenty unemptied

 

feel the wind on your face

breath drawn from within and without

ask shall we speak or be silent?

 

moon breath and sun breath

like a black swan rising on air

her thousandfold wings stretching

to the centre of chaos

 

[Author’s Note: Book 5 of The Mahabharata is the inspiration for this poem. This is not a translation, but rather translation as a way of seeing something more in a text than lies on the surface. I am always thinking about how we can people the ancient texts with female characters whether they be horses, stars, bees, swans, waters or women.]

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2 thoughts on “(Poetry) the great ones by Susan Hawthorne”

  1. Re: Susan Hawthorne – the great ones

    I had to read this poem over a couple of times just to let the words soak in – such a magnificent poem by an astonishing writer…

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